Wednesday, 22 April 2009

I Hoped To...



I tried to write a collaboration of words on this page
to help you visualise your love through my eyes
what could, should and hopefully might or will be
If and when you gift me with your heart

I wanted to present something on this page
to unravel the intricate nature of Love's lifeline
A llifeline that could, might or will commence, if
hopefully, you eventually, link your heart with mine

I aspired to lay bare, a silent a poem on this page
a piece impregnated with words, carefully woven
together with the sole purpose of invading your
subconsciousness, creating visual representations
of the shape, nature and desires of a hopeful,
yet, unknown beloved...




©Remi Banjo, April 2009
***Pictures by Photobucket***

9 comments:

Shubby Doo said...

Wow...I love your way with words...

Dammy said...

Wow! Beautiful words, powerful imagery!

The lines;

“I aspire to lay bare, a silent poem on this page,
A piece impregnated with words…”

does something to me! It sets me thinking and I can’t help but scribble…



A piece impregnated with thoughts,
Thoughts naked with words
Words birth-ed in subtle spasm
Unveiling love’s tender strides

seye said...

I am speechless... mehn!

the arrangement...the drop...

~ScotchBiscuits~ said...

very beautiful!!

The poets voice ~~~ said...

This is a poetic massterpiece! you have a way with words that just leaves one speechless. very nice!!

Jaycee said...

This definitely invaded my subconsciousness...wow.

Oyin said...

Hmm, looks like someone here is very poetic. I like it, I like it!

Remi, United Kingdom said...

@ all, awe...thanks for your lovely and wonderful comments.. poetry for me is relief and self expression... :-))))

Have a great weekend lovely people... x much love

Eyitemi Egwuenu said...

Beautiful !!!