I envision situations not yet experienced
My senses are alive with thoughts of you;
who you are, where you are, if you are near or far
My senses are alight with the knowledge that
somewhere, you are very much in existence
I miss being a two, for its lonely being a single one
Where are you, my appointed someone?
I miss his daring, yet knowing stare
you know, the one that pierces through the soul
holding my heart spell bound within its hold
I miss being him and he being me
Like I miss being a trinity;
Him, me and the holy spirit right there in between
I miss being his silent strength
when all he has is gone and spent
I miss the essence of his kiss
that transforms everything around me
into a welcomed faded bliss
Being one, can be lonely and sometimes not much fun
So, daily in anticipation I look forward to the day
he comes into view, to the day I meet my very own someone
©Remi Banjo, November 2008
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14 comments:
nice written dear .....very touching ....
specially last lines,,,,
it was very good ...n conveying alots of things ....
good poet ....
Oh, thot i made a comment before. I love this poem. So real, so true. For sure he is somewhere and will be revealed in no time at all. Amen... did i say amen, AMEN!
this is really beautiful
Remi, this was truly beautiful. You see, we weren't created to be single. So that appointed one, must come to us...
I feel like framing this and placing it on the wall of my room...lol.
Bravo!!!! am with Jaycee on this bravo!!!!
All i can say is ...wow!
@Mohammed - thanks... yup almost like a message in a bottle :-)
@Fanwest a resounding AMEN oh.. this somebody must come oh, before I take a board sign to the streets eh! lol..
@Jinta.. thank you :-))
@Jaycee... ah you might just get your wish... send me your postal addy and i will see what I can do.. hmm I deas flowing now! lol.. hope you're good hon?
@Robyn - I bow, I bow.. thank you so much :-)
@Seye - awe.. thank you.. x
these are sweet words.
Brilliant and true... welldone! He will come. the beauty is 'u will be caught off guard'... and then waiting would be worth it.
fabulous.
I would like to be with you, Remi. I could do with a companion too.
@deola - thank you luv, hope you are well.
@Street Preacher said - Amen, and Amen.. the man should hurry up...lol.
@ R4Biz said - Thank you:-))
@Anonymous said - eeerm, it would be nice to know who you are.:-)))
Wow Remi this is a nice and creative exposition of a woman's yearning for 'd one'
A beautiful poem, . . . a beautiful dream that is winged with light!
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